My friend and fellow writer, Debby Gies
My Antipodean mate and fellow writer, Derek Haines
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As my old friend Derek has said many times in the past, if you have bothered to pay strict attention to his many blog posts on the subject, instead of merely liking them and moving on as so many of you do, the one area every writer always tends to overlook is a book’s blurb. Apart from reading reviews, what the potential reader really needs to make up their mind to buy your book, is a blurb that leaves them wanting to know more.
On thursday I wrote what I hoped would be a good one. It was total rubbish. All it would have done is put people off wanting to read Céleste. So when I asked him, Derek suggested another. After I’d played around with it for a while, adding one tiny element from my original effort, I then asked my friend, the gorgeous Debby Gies what she thought about it. It made perfect sense to me to not only get Derek’s help on getting the Key Words right, but to also have the point of view of a female writer whose opinion I value highly, especially since my latest offering is a love story.
This is how it looks at present, short, sharp, and to the point:
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Falling in love is always complicated, particularly when you are an artificial intelligence like Céleste. To be able to physically express her love for the man who means so much to her is not going to be easy to achieve in the depths of the Milky Way, or is it?
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Whether or not it turns out to be the blurb’s final incarnation, I’d still be interested to hear your views on it folks. Does it make you curious enough to want to buy a copy?
If you want to have your say in the ultimate version of Céleste’s blurb, please let me know your thoughts on the subject. I promise that all sensible suggestions will be taken into consideration.
Even while writing this post I’ve changed the wording of the blurb slightly…
More later,
Jack
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First of all I’m humbled that you mentioned me here and plastered my face here as well, lol. Second of all to answer your question, I’d have to say that yes, a blurb does contribute to a book’s success, even if it only means capturing the interest of the reader enough to make them want to read it. The book still has to be appealing to the reader, so the blurb itself is not the book’s success. 🙂 Thank you Jack. I’m liking your current version much better. But if I was a betting person, I’m going to wager you’ll change it a few more times. 🙂
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You know me too well Debby ❤ x
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I’m thinking so Jack! 🙂
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Thanks for the reblog Aladin 🙂
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Having written many thousands of words it is quite an art to summarise the book for the blurb in around 100 words. Jack Eason would like your opinion on his latest. I think it sounds intriguing…
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Thanks for the reblog Sally 🙂
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Hi Jack as always your info is of great help. I can write a book but as you say getting the blurb right is very hard. I do read yours, Chris’s and Derek’s blogs although I might not always comment but you three have helped me take another look at writing. After Stanley, I have written one more set in London but not the same as the Stanley books. Plus a naval novel and the one I am working on now.
This change of direction is down to you three and I am hoping that it is the way to go. thanks Michael
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No, thank you Michael 😀
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I smiled at my first read of the blurb, and I understand you will fiddle with it some more. It’s nothing if not titillating:
“…artificial intelligence…” “… to physically express her love…”
My curiosity is peaked. 🙂
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Good. That’s the whole idea… 😉
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Of course! I’m pulled in. 😀
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I think it will get a prospective reader to look inside the book–whether eBook or print. From there, they may go on to buy it if the next thing they see confirms the impression the blurb offers.
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Ah, forgot to add that the blurb would get me into looking inside. So it works for me.
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Cheers John 🙂
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Jack, I’d like to read your next blurb version. This one has the elements, but I know you’ve tweaked it. Chryssa
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You are another lady who knows me too well Chryssa 😉 x
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Your blurb makes me want to have a look inside your book. 🙂
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Thanks Carol. You won’t have to wait much longer to get yourself a copy. I’m almost at the end of writing the last chapter. 🙂
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Like the sound of your blurb, curious and intriguing.
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Thank you Marje 🙂
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Hello. I was intrigued by the A.I. being in love but I was a bit thrown off with the part about the Milky Way. I think it’s lacking a bit of clarity. The concept of an A.I. character that falls in love is very interesting.
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Intrigued enough to want to read Céleste when I publish it?
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Intrigued enough to know more. I love Sci-Fi but I’m not a big fan of Romance. I would like to know a bit more about the story. Will you be posting an excerpt in the near future?
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I already have on several occasions here on my blog…
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I’ll search for it then and check it out.
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It sounds like you have a really interesting concept, and you’ve posed an intriguing question in this blurb, but personally, I found the style of this blurb a bit too distancing, if that makes sense? If I’m gong to be drawn in enough to consider buying a book, I want an emotional hook that connects me to the central character enough that I want to find out what happens to them.
At the moment, for me, it’s a bit too dry a description – more of an extended logline than a blurb,
I totally appreciate how hard it is to write a good blurb, and I’m not trying to be critical for the sake of it, but that’s my honest reaction to your question.
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“If I’m gong to be…” Really? If you are going to offer an opinion, at least have the good grace to check it for errors first.
Now then madam, at no time did I say that the blurb you read was written in stone, merely the first of many drafts. 😉
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Oops, that’s what you get for trying to articulate your thoughts after midnight on a Friday night – sloppy proof reading.
I fully appreciate that this is not the finished article, and at the same time I’m not certain what definition of ‘blurb’ you are using: there seem to be many different interpretations of that term, and as I said, yours read to me more like an extended logline.
Here is a short article I found quite useful when putting blurb/back cover copy together: http://www.betternovelproject.com/blog/back-cover-copy/
Hope that explains my comments a little better.
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Not really…
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…on the dreaded blurb!
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