I’m taking one of my frequent breaks while writing my latest story to reveal how I go about doing it. I’ve spent the last twenty-five years honing the particular method that works for me.
First I write a paragraph. Then I take a cold hard look at the words I’ve written, in particular their order as I’m doing right now while writing this post. It is at this point that I begin to edit the words written, not only for ease of reading, but also from the point of view of spacing, capitalization when required, spelling, grammar and punctuation. While at the same time asking myself what other words can I use that mean the exact same thing, but still clearly convey my meaning to the reader, bearing in mind that there is alway more than one way to say something.
There is only one method when it comes to writing to be avoided at all costs. Sitting in front of your exercise book, typewriter or computer kidding yourself that by churning out thousands of words per day, that somehow by osmosis, doing so makes you a writer. It doesn’t! For the serious independent writer like myself, this line of thinking is a complete fallacy!
In the end all you have achieved is a big mess for someone else to fix, when you should have cleaned the manuscript up yourself before presenting it to your editor, if you use one!
All you have to do is think back to those bad marks you got in class for handing in sloppy work when you presented your essay or composition to your teacher? In this instance imagine that your editor is that teacher, wearing his or her ‘we are not amused’ expression on his or her face, at the prospect of having to make sense of your rambling manuscript…
We all see prime examples on a daily basis right here in the Blogosphere. If you can’t write an error free blog post, what makes you think you can write an error free book manuscript?
NaNoWriMo and other get it down quick notions have a lot to answer for! I’m pretty sure the concept was dreamt up by someone with an obsessive-compulsive disorder. 😉
Once you are finally happy with the paragraph, move on to the next and repeat each step I have mentioned. If your word count reaches somewhere between two hundred and fifty and five hundred words using this method, take it from me you have done a good day’s work.
Why do I limit the number of words I write each day? Simple – a little thing I call brain-fade! Ask yourself how long you can work at 100% capacity before you lose your concentration. This is precisely the reason why I constantly stop what I’m doing to take a breather. What you have to learn is to walk away from it! Go and make yourself a drink or get something to eat. In other words distract yourself. You can always return to it later. I normally work for no more than two hours at a stretch each and every day until I’ve reached the last word in the manuscript.
Each morning when I switch this laptop on, I open the saved file I’m using and once again begin the editing process by reading through what I’ve previously written. Often I see something that needs to be changed. Once I have corrected any mistakes during the daily read through, I can then begin to write the next paragraph.
See, its simple if you know how. My method of constant editing is not for everyone, but it works for me. Remember what I said earlier – a high daily word count is not a good thing unless you have no choice ie, you are a contracted writer for one of the big five publishing houses, where time is money and badly written manuscripts are the norm…
There is one last point for you to consider, turn off the in house spelling or grammar checkers within any writing software package you use. There is no substitute for having a dictionary like the Oxford English and its thesaurus close at hand. Learn to rely on the mark one eyeball like every writer worth their salt does.
PS – right that’s it, lesson over…
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I agree with you, Jack. That’s exactly my process as well.
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I’m glad to hear it Eva. Far too many think they have to race like the Hare. Whereas I prefer the steady pace of the Tortois. 😉 x
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Except for the brain fade thing, which I don’t often get with writing. I’ve been known to write for some very long stretches, intensely focused. However, my fiction word count is not high. It averages about 500-600 words per hour on a good day. Transcribing feelings and images into words–the right words–is not easy.
As for NaNoWriMo–it’s, by far, not the best way for me to write.
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NaNoWriMo is for idiots… 😉
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I cannot say that. But it is definitely not the most effective method for me.
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Let me put it another way then – no serious writer would ever contemplate it. 😉
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Thanks for the reblog Kate 😉 x
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The sad thing is: the brain-fade comes around a lot sooner when you get older. Gives me
problems at the moment…But, it is as Jack writes: take your time, don’t rush….Success!
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Thanks Bob 🙂
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Jack, you’re the first writer I’ve come across that edits as he goes! Happy me! I do the same! Re-edit daily until, when I read it, it flows the way I want it! Worked on a 11/2 page Prologue for more than a kweek, then edited the first chapter for the umpteenth time. Never ending editing is the only way to write! Trick on quick word definition. Type in the word, add meaning in Google. I find other words that might work better. Dictionary & Thesaurus always best though! Back to editing now! 🎶 Christine
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kweek…☹️😣😟
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Don’t forget Eva Blaskovic a fellow Canuck of yours! She is another who constantly edits, just like you and I… 😉 x
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Yes, editing along the way is just part of the writing process. That’s not to say it’s a final edit, but it establishes the closest approximation to what we want to say and how we want to say it, captured in the moment. It saves a lot of grief later, as well.
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It certainly does 😉
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Thanks Jack! I now follow multi-talented Eva. Thanks for the connection! Nope, I’m not a Canuck. I’m a southern Californian! Temp up to 80 degrees today! 🎼 Christine
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Oops, my mistake Christine. Why did I think you were Canadian????? 😉
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